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Alone…

It’s a state of mind,
For no one can truly be alone.

Daily,
They are surrounded by people,
Some who love them, who truly care…

Others who could just care less.

And even if no one is around,
Regardless of those who hate or love,
We still have our memories and day dreams,
To remind us of the love.

But in essence,
Those memories and day dreams do not bring solitude.
For they cause the worst unease known to man.

The feeling known as loss.

This loss causes one to seek.
Yet, what do they seek for?
Only something to take the alone away.

But nothing can.

No matter how many loves one surrounds themselves with,
But the alone will never recede,
For how does one know these loves, are truly loves…

And not just day dreams?

Only in death,
Is when real solitude comes.

For, in death, one has no memories,
No recollection
Of the alone

Even though that is the only time in one’s life
Where they are truly…

Alone.
©2005-2009 ~RaykonMalone
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Not much to say about this... Eh. I don't think it's my best... but you decide.

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not true. being alone is not in one's mind david...well it is but ti isn't. honestly peopel say taht they feel alone...bullshit...the definition of the word alone is "Being apart from others; solitary" or "unique". thus we are all alone at all tiems, for no two people are like awe are all unique. and since people inhabit the earth we a re truely never alone. if some one were shot off into space...still someone is in the same galaxy...even in death...our bodies are never alone...and what happens to our soupd. well, that depends on one's beliefs, but never are they alone. even if the soul just dissipates...ikt is not alone..it is nothing.

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too close for missiles, i'm switching to guns.
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I understand that the alone can never recede, that the memories will bring it back and it never goes away. Hell, I still miss the people that I haven't met since I was four and the loss from them will never go away, but surrounding yourself with people who love you doesn't make it worse, it makes it better. And I know for a fact that you are surrounded by people who truely love you Dave!

But the poem is very well writen *sweatdrop*

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"It's those times when you're in one of your worst moods and you see your little brother looking up 'chicken fuck' in French to get a name for his band, that you realize how wonderful family is."
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i love this, it's so true...it's liek you wrote down what no one has really pieced together yet. it's awesome! good job :)

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.It's.as.simple.as.:.you.make.me.smile.

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